Three Old World Look-Alike Swallowtails: An Ecological Jintishi Poem

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By Derdriu

British swallowtail resting on grasses and sedges, Strumpshaw Fen, Norfolk Broads, UK
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British swallowtail resting on grasses and sedges, Strumpshaw Fen, Norfolk Broads, UK
British swallowtail, Norfolk Broads, Ludham, UK
British swallowtail, Norfolk Broads, Ludham, UK



Sail, scarce swallowtails!

Orchards, fields entice.

Slow for plummy shrubs:

Nectar ... breaks are nice.



southern scarce swallowtail, Jimena, Andalusia Autonomous Community, southern Spain
southern scarce swallowtail, Jimena, Andalusia Autonomous Community, southern Spain
Wang Wei (c. 701-c. 761), Tang poet revered for perfecting jintishi poetry: porcelain statue, Liouhou Temple and Park, Liuzhou, Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, in southern China
Wang Wei (c. 701-c. 761), Tang poet revered for perfecting jintishi poetry: porcelain statue, Liouhou Temple and Park, Liuzhou, Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, in southern China
Cui Hao (704-754), Tang poet revered along with Wang Wei as perfecters of jintishi poetry:  porcelain statue, Liuhou Temple and Park
Cui Hao (704-754), Tang poet revered along with Wang Wei as perfecters of jintishi poetry: porcelain statue, Liuhou Temple and Park
Du Fu (712-770), Tang poet revered as expert in jintishi poetry:  Liuhou Temple and Park
Du Fu (712-770), Tang poet revered as expert in jintishi poetry: Liuhou Temple and Park
Tang Emperor Xuanzong (685-762) flees from capital Chang'an, north central China, during An Shi Rebellion (755-763):  Xuanzong reigned during the jintishi flowering (Freer and Sackler Galleries of Washington D.C.)
Tang Emperor Xuanzong (685-762) flees from capital Chang'an, north central China, during An Shi Rebellion (755-763): Xuanzong reigned during the jintishi flowering (Freer and Sackler Galleries of Washington D.C.)

Jintishi: the Jueju Poem

Jintishi (近體詩) can be rendered into English as "modern form poetry." But it can be understood as a type of verse from ancient China. It indeed exists as a 2,000+-year-old poetic form. It is called modern because of changes introduced during the Tang Dynasty (618-906).

The jintishi can be recognized by its strict rules. It honors poetic structuring of precisely articulated parts into predictably organized wholes. Structuring involves grammar, rhyming, subject, and tone.

Concerning grammar, each line expresses a complete sentence. One rhyme scheme links all sentences in even-numbered lines. But the opening line also may participate in rhyming.

Regarding theme, poets face no restricted matter. But there is a tendency towards the following:

  • Presenting the big within the small and the universal within the particular;
  • Using allusion, particularly regarding historical figures and political events.

Additionally, the third line serves to change direction or turn the thought around. That change or turn will be emphasized by a pause before the reading of the last three syllables in the fourth line.

Respecting patterns, four tones balance: level, rising, falling, entering. How does tone affect the adaptation of jintishi to English poetry-writing efforts? As a non-tonal language. English makes no such demands as level versus deflected tones. But its correct pronunciation requires an understanding of stressed and unstressed syllables.

Predictable alternation of stress and non-stress contributes to the making of an English language equivalent of the jintishi. A jintishi line in English therefore is made up of syllables which answer the commands of "Stress!" and then "Don't stress!" Challenging situations may arise since not all words have two syllables and a word's first syllable is not always stressed.

Regulations also affect line count. Concerning lines, the jintishi can express one of three options. Specifically, it can draw upon the four-line count of a quatrain. Or it draws upon the eight-line count of an octet. Or it may draw upon the variable count of a poem of theoretically unlimited length.

Regarding syllables, the jintishi generally involves five or seven syllables. It infrequently may comprise six syllables. But either way, all lines must follow the syllabic pattern set in the first line. The jintishi which begins with five syllables therefore needs just five syllables in each succeeding line.

The jintishi differs in name depending upon line count. Specifically, the four-lined jintishi is called a jueju (絕句). The jueju is categorized as a wujue (五絕) if it has five-syllable lines. It is considered a qijue (七絕) if it has seven-syllable lines. Either way, the jueju often is described as a broken off, cut off, truncated form of the jintishi octet.

The eight-lined jintishi generally is designated a lushi (律詩). But one with five-syllable lines is a wulu (五律). Jintishi with seven-syllable lines is a qilu (七律).

A pailu (排律) is a variable-lined jintishi.

The jintishi assumes the form of the jueju in the sample poem about scarce swallowtails. The poem can be classified specifically as a wujue. The alternating stressed/unstressed pattern of 20 syllables may be read as follows:


SAIL, scarce SWAL-low-TAILS!

ORCH-ards, FIELDS entice.

SLOW for PLUM-my SHRUBS:

NEC-tar ... BREAKS are NICE.


Scarce swallowtail (Iphiclides podalirius), sailing through Hungarian skies
Scarce swallowtail (Iphiclides podalirius), sailing through Hungarian skies

Scarce Swallowtail Look-Alikes in the Old World

Scientists sometimes categorize the scarce swallowtail into one genus (Iphiclides) which has one species (I. podalirius) and two subspecies. Or sometimes they confer full species status upon the two subspecies. Researchers therefore may find a confusion of scientific classification.

The scientific confusion further can be aggravated by the visual confusion of actual swallowtail sightings. The scarce swallowtails look very similar. Additionally, they may be confused with yet another swallowtail. Fortunately, differences in geographical distribution will come to the rescue in identifying the southern scarce swallowtail, the Chinese scarce swallowtail and the British swallowtail butterflies.

southern scarce swallowtail, Gavà, Catalonia Autonomous Community, northeastern Spain
southern scarce swallowtail, Gavà, Catalonia Autonomous Community, northeastern Spain
Southern scarce swallowtail with knapweed (Centaurea), Sierra de Grazalema Natural Park, northeastern part of the province of Cádiz, southern Spain
Southern scarce swallowtail with knapweed (Centaurea), Sierra de Grazalema Natural Park, northeastern part of the province of Cádiz, southern Spain

Scientists initially gave subspecies status to the evenly-striped, long-tailed southern scarce swallowtail. The butterfly now may be found classified as Iphiclides feisthamelii, with full species status. The genus name Iphiclides memorializes Iphicles (Ιφικλής), half brother to Heracles (Ηρακλής), the strongest hero in ancient Greece. The species name feisthamelii remembers the achievements of French entomologist Joachim Francois Philiberto de Feisthamel (1791-1851).

Southern scarce swallowtail, Montemor-o-Velho, Coimbra District, central Portugal
Southern scarce swallowtail, Montemor-o-Velho, Coimbra District, central Portugal
Caterpillar of southern scarce swallowtail, Zaragoza, northeastern Spain
Caterpillar of southern scarce swallowtail, Zaragoza, northeastern Spain
Pupa of southern scarce swallowtail, Zaragoza, northeastern Spain
Pupa of southern scarce swallowtail, Zaragoza, northeastern Spain

Iphiclides feisthamelii can be found in select areas inland from the southernmost Mediterranean Sea. Specifically, it is native to the Iberian Peninsular countries of Portugal and Spain. It also makes up part of the fauna native to the North African countries of Algeria, Morocco, and Tunisia.

The southern scarce swallowtail egg is laid singly on the undersides of leaves. It initially looks clear, light and translucent. But it reddens as it nears hatching time.

Newly-hatched caterpillars are black and hairy, with two yellowish white upper patches. The first two instars, or larval stages, have the look of bird droppings. The remaining instars sport a bright green color. But all instars will feed from the following host plants:

  • Apple (Malus);
  • Cherry (Prunus);
  • Hawthorn (Crataegus);
  • Peach, pear (Pyrus);
  • Rowan (Sorbus).

The butterfly is the adult or imago stage of the southern scarce swallowtail. It may be seen flying over warm meadows. It will be active between March and September.

Chinese scarce swallowtail, North Yunnan Province, southwestern China
Chinese scarce swallowtail, North Yunnan Province, southwestern China
Chinese scarce swallowtail, male, in private collection
Chinese scarce swallowtail, male, in private collection

As with the southern swallowtail, the long-tailed, more dark than light-striped Chinese scarce swallowtail can be found categorized with subspecies status. But it generally is classified as Iphiclides podalirinus, with full species status. The species name podalirinus recalls Podaleirios (Ποδαλείριος), legendary healer in Greek mythology and son of Asclepios (Ασκληπιός), the ancient Greek god of healing and medicine.

Iphiclides podalirinus can be found in eastern Tibet and western China. A visit must be made at the end of spring, particularly in the transition days between May and June. Specifically, visitors need to be in the following areas to have any possibility of seeing the one to three specimens which may show up during a narrow window of opportunity:

  • The area around Paksho in Tibet's Qamdo Prefecture and valleys at mountainous heights of 9,842+ feet (3,000+ meters);
  • The northern parts of the Sichuan and Yunnan provinces of China.

Lugu Lake with holy Mount Ganmu (Right), in north Yunnan Province, near border with Sichuan Province:  habitat of Chinese scarce swallowtail
Lugu Lake with holy Mount Ganmu (Right), in north Yunnan Province, near border with Sichuan Province: habitat of Chinese scarce swallowtail

Lepidopterists who realize successful sightings in such dry habitats generally attribute the accomplishment to the presence of flowering fields and the proximity to water. Specifically, Chinese scarce swallowtails favor flowering shrubs such as blackthorn (Prunus spinosa) or pink lilac (Syringa spp). Additionally, males may cluster in groups of 10 on sand at the edges of water bodies.

Those who see the Chinese scarce swallowtail often experience a double, rare lepidopteran treat. In eastern Tibet, they may view the Leech butterfly (Polyura posidonius) in the same clustering and flying places as the swallowtail. In western China, they may witness the Chinese byasa butterfly (Byasa daemonius).

British swallowtail nectaring thistle, How Hill National Nature Reserve, Norfolk Broads
British swallowtail nectaring thistle, How Hill National Nature Reserve, Norfolk Broads

Scientists generally categorize the shorter-striped and tailed British swallowtail as Papilio machaon ssp britannicus. They do so, because they consider it a subspecies of the Old World swallowtail (Papilio machaon). The Old World swallowtail also is called the common yellow swallowtail.

The genus name papilio can be translated from Latin into English as "butterfly." The species name machaon derives from ancient Greek mythology. It refers to Machaon (Μαχάων, Makhāōn), legendary physician and son of Asclepios (Ασκληπιός), the god of medicine and healing.

Strumpshaw Fen in Mid-Yare National Nature Reserve, managed by Royal Society for Protection of Birds (RSPB):  habitat of British swallowtails
Strumpshaw Fen in Mid-Yare National Nature Reserve, managed by Royal Society for Protection of Birds (RSPB): habitat of British swallowtails
milk parsley (Peucedanum palustre)
milk parsley (Peucedanum palustre)

The British swallowtail can be found only in the fens and lakes of Norfolk Broads of eastern Anglia in eastern England. In contrast, the Old World swallowtail inhabits a far wider geographical area. It indeed is native to continental Europe as well as to the following areas of eastern Asia and North America:

  • Eastern Asia: Bhutan, China, India, Japan, Korea, Myanmar, Nepal, Oman, Pakistan, Russia, Saudi Arabia, Taiwan, Yemen;
  • North America: Alaska in the United States of America; Canada.

The British swallowtail egg is deposited on exposed, tall flowering plants near the milk-parsley (Peucedanum palustre), the sole larval host food plant. Egg-laying happens between June and mid-July. Eggs look like tiny light yellow spheres. They turn darker just before the hatching date of 1+ week.

British swallowtail caterpillar, Ranworth Broad, Norfolk, UK
British swallowtail caterpillar, Ranworth Broad, Norfolk, UK
British swallowtail (Papilio machaon britannicus) caterpillar, final instar, on fennel
British swallowtail (Papilio machaon britannicus) caterpillar, final instar, on fennel
British swallowtail nectaring thistle, How Hill National Nature Reserve, Norfolk Broads
British swallowtail nectaring thistle, How Hill National Nature Reserve, Norfolk Broads

Caterpillars are active between the third week in June and the fourth week in July. The newly-hatched larva eats its eggshell. The first two instars have the look of bird droppings. But in the succeeding instars, the color is bright green. An orange osmeterium behind the head releases a rotting pineapple smell whenever the caterpillar is threatened.

Four weeks after hatching, the caterpillar enters the pupal stage, between the fourth week in July and the first week in the following June. The pupa looks greenish yellow before and after its black-on-brown overwintering colors. It will be found, attached upright and low down on the stems of reed and sedge plants about 32 feet (9.75 meters) from its last feeding.

The adult, or imago, stage begins between the fourth week in May and the first week in July. But a second generation sometimes emerges between the first and last weeks in August. Either way, the adult exists to fly, mate and sip. Mating, which lasts for several hours, happens the very morning on which the female emerges from the pupa. Sipping, during which wings continue to beat, involves the nectar of the following plants:

  • Bluebell (Hyacinthoides non-scriptus);
  • Devil's-bite sabrous (Succisa pratensis);
  • Ragged robin (Lychnis flos-cuculi);
  • Red clover (Trifolium patense);
  • Teasel (Dipsicus fullorum);
  • Thistle (Carduus spp, Cirsium spp).

The three above-mentioned swallowtails superficially exhibit the differences and similarities of separated triplets. The most obvious difference is range although geography leads to differences in larval food and adult nectar sources. The most obvious similarity is sailing flight over flowering fields and open woodlands, with pollinating breaks for nectar.

southern scarce swallowtail, Nogarejas, Castile and León Autonomous Community, northwestern Spain
southern scarce swallowtail, Nogarejas, Castile and León Autonomous Community, northwestern Spain

Acknowledgment

My special thanks to talented photographers/artists/concerned organizations who make their fine images available on the internet.

Closeup of southern scarce swallowtail, Vale de Leao, Coimbra, central Portugal
Closeup of southern scarce swallowtail, Vale de Leao, Coimbra, central Portugal
Iphiclides podalirius
Iphiclides podalirius
Papilio machaon: genus for British swallowtail
Papilio machaon: genus for British swallowtail
Iphiclides feisthamelii
Iphiclides feisthamelii

Sources Consulted

Collins, N. Mark, and Michael G. Morris. Threatened Swallowtail Butterflies of the World: The IUCN Red Data Book. Gland, Switzerland and Cambridge UK: International Union for Conservation of Nature and Natural Resources, 1985.

Guppy, Crispin Spencer, and Jon Shepard. Butterflies of British Columbia: Including Western Alberta, Southern Yukon, the Alaska Panhandle, Washington, Northern Oregon, Northern Idaho, and Northwestern Montana. Vancouver: University of British Columbia Press in cooperation with the Royal British Columbia Museum, 2001.

Kirby, William Forsell, and Richard Bowdler Sharpe. A Hand-Book to the Order Lepidoptera. Part I. Volume 2. London: Edward Lloyd, Ltd., 1896.

Layberry, Ross A., Peter W. Hall, and J. Donald Lafontaine. The Butterflies of Canada. Specimen Plates by John T. Fowler. Toronto-Buffalo-London: University of Toronto Press,

Munroe, Eugene. “The Classification of the Papilionidae (Lepidoptera).” Memoirs of the Entomological Society of Canada: The Canadian Entomologist, Volume 92, Supplement 17 (1960): 1-51.

Salmon, Michael A., Peter Marren, and Basil Harley. The Aurelian Legacy: British Butterflies and their Collectors. Berkeley-Los Angeles: University of California Press, 2000.

Sperling, Felix A.H., and Richard G. Harrison. “Mitochondrial DNA Variation Within and Between Species of the Papilio machaon Group of Swallowtail Butterflies.” Evolution, Volume 48, No. 2 (April 1994): 408-422.

"What Is Jintishi?" Classical Chinese Poetry: Understanding Jintishi. Washington Chinese Poetry Society. Last accessed March 13, 2012. (available at: http://www.classicalchinesepoetry.com/jintishi-is.htm)

Copyright

Copyright Tuesday, February 7, 2012 by Derdriu

Iphiclides feisthamelii, Peninha, Grande Lisboa Subregion, central Portugal
Iphiclides feisthamelii, Peninha, Grande Lisboa Subregion, central Portugal

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snakeslane Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

This Hub is so beautiful Derdriu! The photographs (so many!) are exquisite. The detailed information on the Look-a-like Swallowtail Butterflies is so far over my head, but makes me want to look ever closer at what I may see in the garden. And the lovely Jintishi poem, well...that you can take this very strict form and make it work in English is such an accomplishment, and your poetic butterfly truly flies, and rests, and sips. Thank you Derdriu for another delightful and richly rewarding experience. Regards, snakeslane

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drbj Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Lovely poetry, beautiful butterflies, and exquisite photographs. What more could anyone want? Thank you, Derdriu.

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A.A. Zavala Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Fascianting poem, beautiful butterfly. Will need to visit and revisit to absord all the details and beauty in the pictures. Thank you for sharing.

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MichaelStonehill 3 months ago

A good description of the two swallowtail species. you have managed to write a lovely simple poem.

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Snakeslane, It's a pleasure to share such delightfully beautiful photographic finds regarding such a gorgeously fragile life form as a butterfly. Especially rewarding is finding something, anything regarding the Chinese scarce swallowtail, about which scientists know hardly anything. Their eggs, larvae and pupae most likely will be quite similar to those which are well known regarding the British swallowtail and the southern scarce swallowtail. But we just don't know ... until some persistent researcher finds out and shares the details.

Thank you for the visit and the enthusiastic appreciation of the scarcity of scarce swallowtails!

Respectfully, Derdriu

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

drbj, It's fun to see that such a regulated poetic form as the jintishi -- in one of its variations -- can be adapted to English poetic endeavors. It helps in the adaptation that experts have realized that the impact of Chinese tones can be achieved through close attention to stress and its lack in English pronunciation.

Thank you for the visit, the wisdom, and the enthusiasm.

Respectfully and appreciatively, Derdriu

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

AAZavala, It's amazing to me that butterflies which are so separated by geography -- easternmost Tibet/westernmost China, England, westernmost Mediterranean Basin countries -- can look so similar. It's also such great learning fun to realize that tribute can be paid to one in a native verse form, a variant of the jintishi poem of China. So I'm glad that one of the HubPages' most accomplished, creative poets appreciates the endeavor of the article and the genius of the Internet-based photographic art.

Thank you for the visit and the kindly enthusiastic reaction to the hub, the photos, and the subject matter of a relative of "The moth"!

Respectfully and appreciatively, Derdriu

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Michael Stonehill, The jintishi and its variations appeal to me precisely because of their eloquent, expressive simplicity. They make me think of the forms that ancient Chinese art would take if turned into written equivalents.

It's self-rewarding to explain the life and times of butterflies so triplet in look. It's additionally rewarding to sign into HubPages and find such appreciation as yours and that of others.

Thank you for the visit and your kind observations.

Respectfully and appreciatively, Derdriu

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snakeslane Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Thank you Derdriu, your reply has helped me focus on what this Hub (and poem) is really all about. Scarcity of a species.

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stessily Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Deedee, An exquisite presentation based on solid research and accompanied by spectacular images!

You must have been thrilled to locate the images of the Chinese scarce swallowtail (Iphiclides podalirinus)!

These butterflies which are found in specific locations certainly choose beautiful settings for their habitats.

Your poem is inspiring and conveys a multitude of information, nuances, and images of these butterflies.

Your explanation of jintishi and your creative application of it into English are admirable, impressive, beautiful!

The statues of jintishi poets are magnificent. I can't even begin to imagine what it must feel like to walk through that park which is peopled with those statues! Such a sign of respect and timeless appreciation.

This hub is everything that I've come to expect from you: a high quality product which flows, informs, engages, entertains.

All the votes.

Kind regards, Stessily

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

what a brilliant, beautiful, useful and interesting hub. I've never heard of this form of poetry and I need to get around to trying new forms. Thanks so much for sharing thing, Derdriu. I shared this

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fordie Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

Exceptional. I've never been big on poetry but you are doing your best to convert us all.

I've had a vague idea about Chinese poetry being based on different patterns than western poetry but you have explained the concept much more clearly than I have seen before.

Many thanks

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Stessily, Once again, it's amazing what individuals and organizations make available through the Internet. In the case of this hub, that generosity generously illustrates the likenesses of those who were most influential in shaping the jintishi into its unique, modern form: Cui Hao, Du Fu, and Wang Wei.

In general, butterflies are so charming, enticing, and fragile in their appearance and life style that they make for attractive illustrations and interesting subject matter. That's the way I feel, and it's heartwarming to witness similar reactions of resident HubPages analytical, artistic and creative experts and specialists such as you.

Thank you for the visit, the votes, the wise observations, and the enthusiastic, kind comments.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

PDXKaraokeGuy, Because I so enjoy all the great learning fun in your poetry, I look forward to your upcoming jintishi. Is it a 20-syllable jueju or a 28-syllable qijue? Or might it be a rare 24-syllable jintishi of 6 syllables per line? Only time will answer these questions as I await notification of your forthcoming jintishi!

Thank you for the visit, the sharing, and the enthusiasm.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Fordie, This poem was inspired by having followers such as you and Alun/Greensleeves Hubs, AAZavala, davenmidtown, Eddy/Eiddwen, Lesley/MovieMaster, and my sister Stessily. It's a way of thanking you all for the naturalistic, photographic and poetic inspirations of reading the hubs by you all. Additionally, it's always fun to make an ingenuous poetic form such as the jintishi better known, particularly in ways which also make such geographically diverse but physically similar swallowtails more familiar.

Thank you for your hubs, and with best 2012 wishes to you and your family,

Derdriu

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James A Watkins Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Lugu Lake is amazingly beautiful. The butterflies are gorgeous, too. I enjoyed your Hub. Thank you for this pleasure.

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

James, Me too, I find Lugu Lake "amazingly beautiful" in the blended colors of sky and water and in the texture of the rocky island and surrounding landscape. It's fun to bring together such pretty pictures about such butterflies so attractive in reality and so photogenic through technology.

Thank you for the visit and the appreciation. Always, always I enjoy reading your hubs.

Respectfully and appreciatively, Stessily's sister

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Hi Derdriu, the Look-Alike Swallowtail is such a beautiful butterfly, the photos are a real joy to look at and your research as always expertly written and interesting.

Another new form of poetry, I had never heard of the Jintishi.

Thank you and voted up.

Best wishes Lesley

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Lesley, It's an honor to read such kindly extolling comments, since you already know how greatly I value your artistic and writing talents in general and your photographic and poetic skills in particular.

Butterflies can sport such exquisite colors and complicated patterns that I appreciate the simple elegance and eloquence of these look-alike swallowtails, so similar in appearance even though so separated by geography: China/Tibet, England, and Spain/Portugal/North Africa.

Thank you for the visit, the votes, and the appreciation.

Respectfully, and with best wishes always to you, Nick and your families,

Derdriu

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flashmakeit Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

This is a great hub and detailed information about the Chinese scarce swallowtail and the British swallowtail butterflies. The photographs are beautiful and the acknowledgments are very thoughtful. Truly an unique and a gem for those you study this subject. I believe you have a lot of Google hit after writing this hub. Keep up the good work.

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

dedriu, i will let you know. I intend to work on this form tomorrow!

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

FlashMakeIt, Butterflies are the epitome of beauty, grace and intelligence. For example, they're not just good-looking, but also smart since they survive despite their fragile wings and small size. So it means a lot to me that I can add to butterfly appreciation in general and to scarce swallowtail knowledge in particular through this hub. In fact, the three look-alikes are among my favorites, especially the British swallowtail.

Thank you for the visit and the very kind appreciation.

Respectfully, and with a big welcome to HubPages,

Derdriu

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

PDXKaraokaGuy, It'll be pure reading pleasure to peruse your jintishi!

Respectfully, Der

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Alright, Derdriu... I'm not entirely sure I did this right, so, I'd like to post a draft here. Please let me know how far off I am.

The sad bobcat caterwauls.

mice escape to little holes.

The bobcat starves and shrivels.

The mice retain their small souls.

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

PDZKaraokeGuy, It's magnificent! You've done the qijue version of the jintishi: a jueju (jintishi of 4 poetic lines) with 7 syllables, in comparison to my wujue of 5. For reading, you'd put dots (...) between "to" and "little" to signify a pause, to heighten audience involvement and suspense over the destination in the second line. There'd also be the same dots between "retain" and "their" in the last line. The second and fourth lines both have caesura, or pauses, when read. So it would look like this:

mice escape to ... little holes

The mice retain ... their small souls.

Are you going to put this into a hub? It's monumental in its fun, gentle irony and philosophical realism: so very ancient Chinese!

Thank you for the poetic genius that you are,

Der

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Eiddwen 3 months ago

What a brilliant and beautiful hub and I have to award it my up up and away plus a bookmark.

Take care and enjoy your day.

Eddy.

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Eddy, It's always a pleasant honor to be visited by the HubPages resident published author. So it's most heartwarming that you like this poetic article about remarkably look-alike swallowtails from countries across the pond!

Thank you for the visit, the votes, and the kind wishes.

Respectfully, and with best wishes to you, Dai and your families,

Derdriu

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natures47friend Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

What can I say...simply amazing. Basically all of the above and I had never heard of this type of poetry either. Beautiful photos and so much information in one hub. Voted up and as I could not decide which button....all of them!

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Natures47Friend, Jintishi in general and wujue in particular are accomplished, ancient, attractive poetic forms which therefore lend themselves well to the timelessness of environmental themes. One of my favorite environmental interests is butterflies, which bring so much beauty and life to our world through their fragile tenacity and their critical nectaring/pollinating. So it's fun to be able to combine the poetic form with the poetic butterfly, one of which even is Chinese!

Thank you for the visit, the votes, and the kind enthusiasm.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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Greensleeves Hubs Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Really nice to see the comparison between three closely related forms of swallowtail Derdriu, and how they have developed along different lines, yet retained similar characters.

It's a treat to see the rare Chinese scarce swallowtail, and of course to see the one and only British swallowtail - a butterfly I have yet to see in the wild. But my favourite is the Southern scarce swallowtail with those lovely zebra-striped fore wings.

As usual an extremely informative page laced with beautiful photos, and introduced with another verse form from the far east. Anybody who wishes to explore and experiment with different styles of poetry would be well advised to visit your pages Derdriu.

Voted up.

Yours, Alun.

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Alun, The three look-alikes are all photogenic. In reality, they undoubtedly are every bit as entrancing as they are on film. But me too, I agree that the Southern swallowtail is particularly spectacular precisely because of its zebra-striped fore wings.

In organizing my material, I debated which country to look for an appropriate poetic form: China/Tibet, England, Portugal/Spain. Finally, I decided that an ancient Chinese poetic form such as the jintishi in all its variations subtly communicates the survival which I hope for all three. Additionally, it highlights the precarious state of the Chinese/Tibetan scarce swallowtail which "scarcely" is observed and whose numbers really are "scarce."

In a previous comment, you mentioned the possibility of sharing original poetry on HubPages. May that possibility become actuality soon, what with your 100% track record in reaching artistic heights through your photography and analytical/descriptive writing.

Thank you for the visit, the votes, the wise words, and the kind observations.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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John Sarkis Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Derdriu, what a great poem, and as usual, you're a wealth of knowledge when it comes to literature. As they say, you learn something new everyday. I'm also always impressed by your photos.

Beautiful - voted up as such

John

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

John, This article is so much fun to organize and put into final form that I appreciate the laudatory comments. Poetry can be such an effective way of communicating cultural diversity and environmental concerns to children (and grown-ups ;-]). Children's art and writing are such win-win situations that they warm my heart. Still, I can remember kindergarteners and first graders tell me when they print letters in different colors that exclamation marks are always black!

Thank you for the visit, the votes, and the kindly reactions.

Respectfully and appreciatively, Derdriu

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Debby Bruck Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

My Dear Deirdru ~ Always monumental works of art that takes my breath away to read and view. Feeling like I've been lead step-by-step through a sacred museum of specimens pinned and mounted in glass boxes, with an outdoor garden of plants and butterflies in all stages of metamorphosis.

You act as our historic and environmental guide. I especially appreciated this explanation of how to read the words aloud.

SAIL, scarce SWAL-low-TAILS!

ORCH-ards, FIELDS entice.

SLOW for PLUM-my SHRUBS:

NEC-tar ... BREAKS are NICE.

Many blessings to one I admire

Debby

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Debby, You're such a quick study and have such an inquisitive, investigative mind that I hope to view a jintishi of your own creation shortly.

Thank you for the visit and the kind enthusiasm, so appreciated from one whose analytical, artistic, creative, investigative and writing genius I so admire.

Respectfully and appreciatively, Derdriu

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sonia05 Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

Amazing hub with beautiful pictures and well reesearched details! I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Your jueju poem is beautiful and sweet! Such nectar....treats are indeed very nice!

simply brilliant! voted up!

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Derdriu Hub Author 3 months ago

Sonia, When I read the poem aloud, I say "nectar!" and stop to wipe my mouth with the back of my hand like children may do when they've eaten too much of a good thing. That gives me the pause which the general jintishi format requires in the last line of all its variations (5-, 6- or 7-syllables per line over 4 to 8+ lines).

Will you be trying this form out at all?

Thank you for the visit, the votes, and the very kind enthusiasm over this article so dear to my nature- and poetry-loving heart.

Respectfully and appreciatively, Derdriu

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 2 months ago

i'll have to work on some more. I also want to try Ghaisal and Villanelle

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Derdriu Hub Author 2 months ago

PDXKaraokeGuy, Please do! It's wonderful learning fun to be reading my way through your creative hubs. Whatever you do with these three forms, and any others, will be most rewarding for readers such as myself.

Thank you for the visit!

Respectfully, and awaiting with anticipation your creations in Chinese, French and Islamic poetry,

Derdriu

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