A Maple's Tale: A Sappy, Sugary, Syrupy Diamante Poem
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Seeds
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Transformational transitional
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Promising struggling thriving
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Roots trunks branches twigs
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Budding flowering flowing
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Sweet syrupy
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Maple
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The Diamante Poem
The word diamante can be translated as “diamond” in English. It is the way of saying diamond in Italian, Portuguese and Spanish. But it traces its origins back to the ancient Greek word for “unbreakable”: αδάμας, adámas.
The word also can be used to designate a poem which looks diamond-like in shape when it is written out. This use of the word is fairly recent. It in fact owes this special meaning to the innovative thinking of Iris M. Tiedt, who published “A New Poetry Form: The Diamante” in 1969.
The diamante poem must follow a specific structure. For example, it needs to be expressed in no more than seven lines. Each line offers a precise number of words and kind of wording. The poem requires no punctuation or rhyme scheme. The diamante therefore stipulates the following of its creators in regard to each line:
first line:
| noun
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second line:
| adjective-adjective
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third line:
| participle-participle-participle
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fourth line:
| noun-noun-noun-noun
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fifth line:
| participle-participle-participle
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sixth line:
| adjective-adjective
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seventh line:
| noun
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In terms of language, the diamante can be used to illustrate shades of meaning which combine and contribute to the overriding message of the poem. In terms of theme, it can illustrate a concept or manifestation and its opposite. For example, a diamante can transition from the opening description of despair into a closing description of hope.
The diamante specifically devotes the first two and last two lines to the naming and prominent characteristics of someone or something. The three lines in between may give information which applies to both objects or organisms. But technically, they need to be split in the connectedness of their description. The entire fourth line and the first half of the fifth line ought to pertain to the opening object or organism. The second half of the fifth line and the entire sixth line should relate to the closing object or organism.
The Sugar Maple Tree
The sugar maple (Acer saccharum) functions as the central idea and image in the hub presented above. It is native to Canada and the United States of America. It may be found growing naturally in the following southeastern Canadian provinces:
- New Brunswick;
- Nova Scotia;
- Ontario;
- Québec.
It also will grow naturally in the northern United States eastward from the Mississippi River banks. It therefore will have native status in the following regions:
- Middle Atlantic (Delaware, District of Columbia, Maryland, New Jersey, New York, Pennsylvania);
- Middle West (Illinois, Indiana, Iowa, Michigan, Minnesota, Missouri, Ohio, Wisconsin);
- New England (Connecticut, Maine, Massachusetts, New Hampshire, Rhode Island, Vermont).
It will hold similarly native status in the South Atlantic states of Georgia, North Carolina, South Carolina, and Virginia.
Within its native ranges, the sugar maple adds beauty to the landscape. For example, it can give vertical interest. It is a somewhat slow grower. It in fact may average just about a foot (30.48 centimeters) of growth per year. It nevertheless may grow to a mature height which ranges from 85 to 115 feet (25 to 35 meters). The lower range in height will be more likely in urban settings while the upper will be more attainable in wilder, less cultivated landscapes.
The sugar maple also can contribute heavily to the visual interest of a space. It does so predominantly through the color of its leaves. Its spring and summer colors tend to be a rich green. But its fall colors turn leaves orange, red and yellow and winged seeds bronze.
Additional visual interest can be generated by the tree’s flowers. Sugar maple flowers fall within the category of springtime corymbs. They serve to add textural and visual interest. Without petals, they take the shape of many small yellow-green branches.
But the overriding appeal of sugar maples is the taste and whiff of the sugary sweet syrup made from the tree’s annual run of sticky sap.
Acknowledgment
My special thanks to:
- Talented artists and photographers/concerned organizations who make their fine images available on the Internet;
- Virginia State University and Polytechnic Institute for the high caliber of its Carol M. Newman Library collection of books on environmental issues and resources and of poetry and the analysis and criticism of poetry as well as of its online resources regarding the environment and trees.
Sources Consulted
“Sugar Maple Acer saccharum Marsh.” Virginia Tech Department of Forest Resources and Environmental Conservation. http://dendro.cnre.vt.edu/dendrology/syllabus/factsheet.cfm?ID=2 (Last accessed December 12, 2011)
Tiedt, Iris M. and Dr. Sidney W. Tiedt (Eds.). Unrequired Reading: An Annotated Bibliiography for Teachers and School Administrators. Second Edition. Corvallis: Oregon State University Press, 1963, 1967. http://ir.library.oregonstate.edu/xmlui/bitstream/handle/1957/7438/Unrequired_Reading.pdf?sequence=1 (Last accessed December 12, 2011)
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Copyright Monday, December 12, 2011 by Derdriu
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Very informative. This is an awesome hub. Thanks for sharing!
Another excellent piece on a new poetry form Derdriu, your Diamante is awesome, photos and descriptive info on the Sugar Maple and the Diamante origins really inform the reader. Thank you so much. Regards, snakeslane
Hi Derdriu, there is always something new to learn on hubpages, and I learn so much from your hubs.
I had never heard of a Diamante poem before, I loved your poem and the explanation.
The photos and information on the maple tree was so interesting, thank you for sharing a great hub and voted up, best wishes Mm
Derdriu ~ What's not to love? Voted across the board and encourage others to visit. Must see Acer tree. I like the way you added the sparkly Diamond, the charts added something special, too, and the wonderful elegant composition of your pages. Everything is poetry from your lips. Blessings this day to you, Debby
Oh Derdriu,
Your obvious hard work certainly paid off here.
I love anything connected to naure etc and this one was a treat.
Those photos brilliant.
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
Hello Sweet Derdriu - I linked back here from one of my newer poetry hubs. Blessings, Debby
most definitely. always welcome to link. Keep me informed. Blessings, Debby
Derdriu, One of my favorite poems, "Trees", was written by Alfred Joyce Kilmer (December 6, 1886 – July 30, 1918), a Catholic poet who was a casualty of WWI, dying in the Second Battle of the Marne, which was the turning point in the war on the western front but Joyce Kilmer did not live to know that:
"I think that I shall never see
A poem lovely as a tree."
Your ecological diamante bespeaks maple trees to me in all their loveliness. Your explanation of the diamante poem and your presentation of sugar maples are both well researched, clearly written, and, of course, perfectly illustrated with beautiful, pertinent images.
All the votes. Exquisite!
Stessily
Derdriu,
I never realised that the maple tree was such a beatiful tree.
as usual a well researched and interesting hub. The pictures tell their own story, I like the colour wheel of leaves, that is a really nice touch, were they real?
The way they capture the sap reminds me of the way they tap rubber trees in India.
I love the syrup, and quite often add it to my bread-mother to give extra food to the yeast.
all the votes as usual for your diamond efforts.
regards
yer owd Yorkshire pal
Tony















xethonxq Level 3 Commenter 5 months ago
Beautiful. I've never heard of a Diamante poem before...learn something new every day. It's very descriptive and vivid. Makes me want to give it a try myself. Your pictures are fantastic by the way. Good hub Derdriu. :)