A Maple's Tale: A Sappy, Sugary, Syrupy Diamante Poem

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By Derdriu

Sugar maple's autumn splendor
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Seeds
Transformational transitional
Promising struggling thriving
Roots trunks branches twigs
Budding flowering flowing
Sweet syrupy
Maple
Samara (seed capsules) which enclose sugar maple seeds
Samara (seed capsules) which enclose sugar maple seeds
In the center, the characteristic diamond shape, known geometrically as a rhombus
In the center, the characteristic diamond shape, known geometrically as a rhombus

The Diamante Poem

The word diamante can be translated as “diamond” in English. It is the way of saying diamond in Italian, Portuguese and Spanish. But it traces its origins back to the ancient Greek word for “unbreakable”: αδάμας, adámas.

The word also can be used to designate a poem which looks diamond-like in shape when it is written out. This use of the word is fairly recent. It in fact owes this special meaning to the innovative thinking of Iris M. Tiedt, who published “A New Poetry Form: The Diamante” in 1969.

The diamante poem must follow a specific structure. For example, it needs to be expressed in no more than seven lines. Each line offers a precise number of words and kind of wording. The poem requires no punctuation or rhyme scheme. The diamante therefore stipulates the following of its creators in regard to each line:

 
 
first line:
noun
second line:
adjective-adjective
third line:
participle-participle-participle
fourth line:
noun-noun-noun-noun
fifth line:
participle-participle-participle
sixth line:
adjective-adjective
seventh line:
noun

In terms of language, the diamante can be used to illustrate shades of meaning which combine and contribute to the overriding message of the poem. In terms of theme, it can illustrate a concept or manifestation and its opposite. For example, a diamante can transition from the opening description of despair into a closing description of hope.

The diamante specifically devotes the first two and last two lines to the naming and prominent characteristics of someone or something. The three lines in between may give information which applies to both objects or organisms. But technically, they need to be split in the connectedness of their description. The entire fourth line and the first half of the fifth line ought to pertain to the opening object or organism. The second half of the fifth line and the entire sixth line should relate to the closing object or organism.

Color spectrum evinced in autumnal leaves from one and the same sugar maple tree
Color spectrum evinced in autumnal leaves from one and the same sugar maple tree
A common worldwide symbol of endurance and strength, the maple leaf iconically decorates Canada's national  flag, flying here  outside the Maritime Museum of the Atlantic, Halifax, Nova Scotia
A common worldwide symbol of endurance and strength, the maple leaf iconically decorates Canada's national flag, flying here outside the Maritime Museum of the Atlantic, Halifax, Nova Scotia

The Sugar Maple Tree

The sugar maple (Acer saccharum) functions as the central idea and image in the hub presented above. It is native to Canada and the United States of America. It may be found growing naturally in the following southeastern Canadian provinces:

  • New Brunswick;
  • Nova Scotia;
  • Ontario;
  • Québec.

Trunk of sugar maple, Ridley Creek State Park, Pennsylvania
Trunk of sugar maple, Ridley Creek State Park, Pennsylvania

It also will grow naturally in the northern United States eastward from the Mississippi River banks. It therefore will have native status in the following regions:

  • Middle Atlantic (Delaware, District of Columbia, Maryland, New Jersey, New York, Pennsylvania);
  • Middle West (Illinois, Indiana, Iowa, Michigan, Minnesota, Missouri, Ohio, Wisconsin);
  • New England (Connecticut, Maine, Massachusetts, New Hampshire, Rhode Island, Vermont).

It will hold similarly native status in the South Atlantic states of Georgia, North Carolina, South Carolina, and Virginia.

Sugar maple's soaring greenery, Morton Arboretum, Lisle, Illinois
Sugar maple's soaring greenery, Morton Arboretum, Lisle, Illinois

Within its native ranges, the sugar maple adds beauty to the landscape. For example, it can give vertical interest. It is a somewhat slow grower. It in fact may average just about a foot (30.48 centimeters) of growth per year. It nevertheless may grow to a mature height which ranges from 85 to 115 feet (25 to 35 meters). The lower range in height will be more likely in urban settings while the upper will be more attainable in wilder, less cultivated landscapes.

Not yet ready to leave home:  sugar maple seeds still holding onto the tree, Dougherty Heights, Boone, North Carolina
Not yet ready to leave home: sugar maple seeds still holding onto the tree, Dougherty Heights, Boone, North Carolina

The sugar maple also can contribute heavily to the visual interest of a space. It does so predominantly through the color of its leaves. Its spring and summer colors tend to be a rich green. But its fall colors turn leaves orange, red and yellow and winged seeds bronze.

Autumnal palette of sugar maple leaves
Autumnal palette of sugar maple leaves

Additional visual interest can be generated by the tree’s flowers. Sugar maple flowers fall within the category of springtime corymbs. They serve to add textural and visual interest. Without petals, they take the shape of many small yellow-green branches.

But the overriding appeal of sugar maples is the taste and whiff of the sugary sweet syrup made from the tree’s annual run of sticky sap.

Catching sap for maple syrup, Beaver Meadow Audubon Center, North Java, New York
Catching sap for maple syrup, Beaver Meadow Audubon Center, North Java, New York

Acknowledgment

My special thanks to:

  • Talented artists and photographers/concerned organizations who make their fine images available on the Internet;
  • Virginia State University and Polytechnic Institute for the high caliber of its Carol M. Newman Library collection of books on environmental issues and resources and of poetry and the analysis and criticism of poetry as well as of its online resources regarding the environment and trees.

Samara (seed capsule) which encloses sugar maple seeds
Samara (seed capsule) which encloses sugar maple seeds

Sources Consulted

“Sugar Maple Acer saccharum Marsh.” Virginia Tech Department of Forest Resources and Environmental Conservation. http://dendro.cnre.vt.edu/dendrology/syllabus/factsheet.cfm?ID=2 (Last accessed December 12, 2011)

Tiedt, Iris M. and Dr. Sidney W. Tiedt (Eds.). Unrequired Reading: An Annotated Bibliiography for Teachers and School Administrators. Second Edition. Corvallis: Oregon State University Press, 1963, 1967. http://ir.library.oregonstate.edu/xmlui/bitstream/handle/1957/7438/Unrequired_Reading.pdf?sequence=1 (Last accessed December 12, 2011)

Copyright

Copyright Monday, December 12, 2011 by Derdriu

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xethonxq Level 3 Commenter 5 months ago

Beautiful. I've never heard of a Diamante poem before...learn something new every day. It's very descriptive and vivid. Makes me want to give it a try myself. Your pictures are fantastic by the way. Good hub Derdriu. :)

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chrisam01 Level 4 Commenter 5 months ago

Very informative. This is an awesome hub. Thanks for sharing!

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snakeslane Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Another excellent piece on a new poetry form Derdriu, your Diamante is awesome, photos and descriptive info on the Sugar Maple and the Diamante origins really inform the reader. Thank you so much. Regards, snakeslane

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Derdriu Hub Author 5 months ago

xethonxq, A diamond-shaped poem is not that difficult to write. It motivates the creator to get to the essence of someone or something. It would be great for you to share your poem (should you choose to write it) in a hub!

Thank you for the visit and the kind enthusiasm.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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Derdriu Hub Author 5 months ago

chrisam01, The diamante can be great learning fun to read and write. In fact, it is among the first forms of poetry which many children meet in early instruction on creative writing and environmentalism.

Thank you for the visit and the enthuasiastic reaction.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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Derdriu Hub Author 5 months ago

Snakeslane, It's always fun for me to situate something narrow within the wider context and vice versa. For example, it's a satisfying challenge to find a cultural or environmental association within a raindrop and to uncover the raindrop within a storm event.

Thank you for the visit and the enthusiastic observations.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Hi Derdriu, there is always something new to learn on hubpages, and I learn so much from your hubs.

I had never heard of a Diamante poem before, I loved your poem and the explanation.

The photos and information on the maple tree was so interesting, thank you for sharing a great hub and voted up, best wishes Mm

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Derdriu Hub Author 5 months ago

Movie Master, A diamante does not have to deal with nature. But I'm glad that it's as cooperative as the traditional Japanese haiku about concise expression of nature's deep truths. It always is fun for me to bring in the wider cultural and historical contexts.

Thank you for sharing, etc.,

Derdriu

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Debby Bruck Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Derdriu ~ What's not to love? Voted across the board and encourage others to visit. Must see Acer tree. I like the way you added the sparkly Diamond, the charts added something special, too, and the wonderful elegant composition of your pages. Everything is poetry from your lips. Blessings this day to you, Debby

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Derdriu Hub Author 5 months ago

Debby, The sugar maple is such a user friendly tree. It offers food and shelter to animals and food and supplies to people. In addition, it serves as a landscape enhancer. Me too, I agree that what is there not to love about the sugar maple, its sturdy wood, flamboyant color, and delicious sap?

Thank you for the visit, the votes, the sharing, and the ever kind enthusiasm.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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Eiddwen 5 months ago

Oh Derdriu,

Your obvious hard work certainly paid off here.

I love anything connected to naure etc and this one was a treat.

Those photos brilliant.

Take care and enjoy your day.

Eddy.

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Derdriu Hub Author 5 months ago

Eddy, Me too, I love the combination of cultural context, poetic expression, and topic nature. That's why I so enjoy visiting your artistic, culinary and poetic creations.

Thank you for the visit, and the enthusiastic insights.

Respectfully, and with best wishes to you and Dai and your families, Derdriu

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Debby Bruck Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Hello Sweet Derdriu - I linked back here from one of my newer poetry hubs. Blessings, Debby

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Derdriu Hub Author 5 months ago

Debby, Your article with your own diamante is clever, insightful and magnificent! May I link this hub back to yours?

Thank you for the visit and kind enthusiasm.

Respectfully, Derdriu

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Debby Bruck Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

most definitely. always welcome to link. Keep me informed. Blessings, Debby

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stessily Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

Derdriu, One of my favorite poems, "Trees", was written by Alfred Joyce Kilmer (December 6, 1886 – July 30, 1918), a Catholic poet who was a casualty of WWI, dying in the Second Battle of the Marne, which was the turning point in the war on the western front but Joyce Kilmer did not live to know that:

"I think that I shall never see

A poem lovely as a tree."

Your ecological diamante bespeaks maple trees to me in all their loveliness. Your explanation of the diamante poem and your presentation of sugar maples are both well researched, clearly written, and, of course, perfectly illustrated with beautiful, pertinent images.

All the votes. Exquisite!

Stessily

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Derdriu Hub Author 4 months ago

Stessily, Trees are awesome in their generously beneficial attitude towards the environment. For example, they accommodate tree houses, feed and shelter wildlife, give shade, provide beauty for the landscape, and replace carbon dioxide with oxygen.

Maple trees always make me think of Canada, and Great-grandfather Robert's friendship with the Chippewa and the French Canadian fur traders and maple syrup collectors.

Thank you for the visit, the vote, and the kind enthusiasm.

Respectfully, Derdriu

P.S. Thank you for sharing the poem by Alfred Joyce Kilmer (any relation to Val?). It's sad that he died so young, but he did so most bravely and generously. It's because of people such as him that the first world war really should have been the war to end all wars. It's great that unlike so many, his identity was known and he left an enduring poetic legacy.

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tonymead60 Level 6 Commenter 4 weeks ago

Derdriu,

I never realised that the maple tree was such a beatiful tree.

as usual a well researched and interesting hub. The pictures tell their own story, I like the colour wheel of leaves, that is a really nice touch, were they real?

The way they capture the sap reminds me of the way they tap rubber trees in India.

I love the syrup, and quite often add it to my bread-mother to give extra food to the yeast.

all the votes as usual for your diamond efforts.

regards

yer owd Yorkshire pal

Tony

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Derdriu Hub Author 4 weeks ago

Tony, Yes, the color wheel is made of real leaves from one tree. The sugar maple produces three season color and in winter provides structural interest with its attractive bark and shape.

Grandfather Charles knew how to tap maple sugar. He taught his children -- one of whom was my mother -- to tap the trees on his property at the edge of the town his father founded exactly halfway between the Equator and the North Pole.

Rubber-tapping in Brazil makes me think of maple sap-tapping. So it must be somewhat like your experiences with rubber-tapping in India.

Thank you for the visit, the votes, and the shared experiences.

Respectfully and appreciatively, Derdriu

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